A downloadable Short Story

-I have no idea what people come up with when they are supposed t describe  themselves - never been good at it - I barely know what I’m doin for real - it’s just this void in me is getting harder to live with - this loneliness is eating me alive, mixed with the anger - I gotta find my old best friend who one day just vanished off - to this, whole huge festival / cult thing in this abandoned island - that’s what the picture and note showed at least - WORLD’S FAIR- I’m gonna find him - before the cavity swallows me hole…

What’s it about? - you’re put through a first-person narrative perspective of the 17 years old runaway anti-social wierdo Abe -aka Kachinka as he puts it- who’s gone ran away to find his former best friend in a festival held by other teenagers in an abandoned island - carrying his inner traumas with him and diving deep into the loneliness and eeriness of what’s going on… he’s caught in a crossfire between an alien conspiracy, and a festival going haywire - and the other part? - you gotta see for yourself

Notes

I wrote the original version back in summer 2021 and released it on a few websites that are now kinda defunct so the original version’s digital version got cooked— several years I still felt like it’s a wasted potential not to evolve this story somehow - so I finally went back to it and did a  “remix” on it— so yea it’s what you’re aboutta read right now

Originally conceived as a Watch Dogs fan-fic (it still kinda is, indirectly) - when I wrote it first on paper it’s like in the middle I changed stuff like deep down it started to feel deep instead of being about action-adventure journey -

Don’t worry- it’s not boring or full of yapping - it’s not even that long - probably 44 pages total- it’s what inside it that counts - 

other than that - I got nothing to tell ya - why you should read it - is it even worth it - no clues gng - I just remember how writing it changed me - made me feel something - maybe when you read it doesn’t feel the same way it’s a different experience - I’m tired of explaining stuff - I can’t forced it on to ya - I just can assure you - this adventure will either change you in a good or bad way 

Genres
Psychological Thriller / Teen / Fan-Fiction/ Adventure / Anti-Hero /Short Story


SPECIAL THANKS

Avacado / Asteria — made me re-peruse it- inspired a certain character
MrCurious — first one who read the og version and loved it
Sailor20s — asked if they were in the story too
Berker - inspired another certain character 
Kokok - same as before
TikTok - dunno cuz it changed my whole perspective
And all the songs I listened to but never memorized the name for but included as Easter egg 
And me - cuz I’m just that selfish

Artworks & Sketches

(Sorry technical issue thing - the years that I had the ideas in my head I did sketches and artworks  but somehow dear ITCH.IO hasn’t got any of my  pics here yet - so I’d say wait till I’d update it later - or u can see them on my TikTok or Insta (yk the link on the profile n all that)


Further Notes

I may not be like how I was back when I first created this story - but I don’t care how bad or good it came out then or now - I hope it makes you see that too - it’s also a farewell to the journey I’ve had with this lore - including the nights I imagined them with me in bed - the notes I wrote on my iPhone- the signs that reminded me of it - how I evolved and altered like the story did 

look out - soon there’d be my first video game and this’d be the adaption 

turns out I reached the csvity - and jumped out of it- 

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CAVITY_2025_FINAL_VERSION (Cavity).pdf 275 kB

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